This was delightful! I enjoyed how you switched from one POV to the other and showed how each interpreted the same situation. Napoleon's jealousy and his 'little voice' in his head were cracking me up!
Thanks for sharing this great story!
From: Jan Date: 11/18/2004
Well, that was absolutely delightful...and a huge treat! We all know that the dimwitted Jennifer didn't deserve Bachelor 1 or 2...# 3 was probably even too much for her, too. Ah, but in the end the two gorgeous guys ended up with whom they were meant to be in the ultimate dating game! What an enjoyable and delectable read...thanks so much.