I have found your latest story to be very well developed, deep and captivating. I only wonder at why you wrapped it up so quickly....? It seems like it is missing an ending (or a beginning, as it were). Like when they woke up in the morning? You spent so much time developing the details of their first encounter, that it seems a shame to not have spent the same amount of time detailing their decisive moment? Just a thought from one who enjoys reading, but does not write herself. Keep up the great work. I await the next story with lots of anticipation. Yours.....Francine
From: Ekay Date: 07/26/2004
All I can say is "WOW" Great story, great writing, couldn't stop reading. This is a definete keeper. Only complaint is YOu need to write more!!!. Thanks for sharing. Ekay
